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Crimson Room

By Maren Frost Came from The Blue Door Romance Chamber romance 8 views 0 saves Rated 4.0 / 5 by 1 reader

The room behind the blue door was not blue at all. Crimson paper covered the walls, velvet-dark where the lamps touched it. A chair had been drawn back from the bed. Two glasses waited on the table beside a knife for the oranges, its blade polished bright enough to catch Mara's mouth when she looked down.

She stepped inside and left the door open behind her. Soren did not move from the window. That restraint should have made the room safer. Instead it made every inch between them louder: rug, table, chair, bed, the six careful feet he had left untouched.

Mara read the first returned letter aloud. The first sentence was courteous. The second was not. By the fourth, Soren had turned his face toward the glass as if the street below could save him from hearing his own hope.

She stopped before the last line. Folded the letter once. Placed it facedown beside the untouched glasses.

"No," she said.

The word did not end the room. It lit it. Soren closed his eyes as if the syllable had crossed the distance and put a hand on his chest. Mara stayed at the threshold, neither retreating nor entering further, and watched the invitation rearrange itself around what she had refused to grant.

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