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What should I read?
I want the story where someone else sees what happened after Mara's refusal. I do not want the romantic version first.
What should I read?
I read Ash in the Hallway and liked the practical morning-after evidence. Which thread or story keeps that outside-the-room angle?
What should I read?
I liked the tense room, the emotional refusal, and the aftermath it left behind. Which response story gives me the clearest next step?
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Read Crimson Room if you want Mara's refusal directly. Read Ash in the Hallway if you want the morning-after evidence from someone outside the room.
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Read Ash in the Hallway. It keeps Mara's refusal visible through someone who was not inside the room.
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